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| faking closure 2006-09-04 ch 1,   | oh, i absolutely love this, short (sort of) and sweet, i love how you repeated the first stanza at the end but with a little twist. very very lovely. -naomi ps: hah ive been playing piano for 11 years and i have a big passion for it... i really want to join the jazz band but im in colorguard and their competitions fall on the same days. we're in field show season now though and being with the band is my favorite part of the year :) |
| Samana 2006-08-14 ch 1, | i like this, i think that it might've been better if it were longer but i still like it a lot |
| Sting Ferdinand 2006-08-14 ch 1, | Too lazy to log in... I love it! Great metaphors. I like how you didn't use capital letters. :P |