This story keeps you on the edge of your seat wondering what's going to happen next, who will they find next, what danger lies ahead. The characters are strong and well defined, the dialogue crisp and interesting. The emotions that fill each line of text is palpable. I find this story intriguing and can't wait to see where it goes.

Nice emotion. I love how the emotion is tied deeply into the story and its characters. Again, Becca does a great job at describing both the characters and the settings. *claps*

Your usual wonderful job, Becca. Well worth having to post a few times to read the rest.

This story is great! Seriously worth posting for and it only gets better. Plus you get to check out her other works too.