oh! that's it? it was getting good! continue it!

JEN! I love this...dunno why though...

Aww... I really like the formatting. A very thought provoking little one shot. I love it. The end was really sad. It's like evrything that /happened/ is left out but the words, which give hints as to what happened, are so strong and emphasized. Bravo. It's so powerful, how it's always two, two, two (like the title) and then... just one. Really great piece.

Exceptionally well-written. The mirror part was a very interesting twist. BTW, are you still doing anything with the character contest?

wow. and i mean, whoa. (: i thought this was good, short, angsty and quite well-written. i especially liked the mirror thing, which adds to the twist at the end. nice work!

To want someone, only to be faced by rejection can be hard to deal with. Very nice delivery with the mirror in the end. I look forward to reading more of your work.

~The Blurb

aw, that is so sad! wow, i didn't realize it was a mirror until the end...

-YuLian