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S.L. Klassen
2006-08-14
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abuseBefore you start posting your work online to be criticized, you might want to check your spelling. It should be "you're" instead of "your". By the way, I've seen lots of your work, and I noticed that they're mostly short, and all about the same thing. You might try a little variety in your length and subject.
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