 Frore 2006-08-14 . chapter 1I wasn't confused until I read your author's note...
So I'm going to review it as I understood it. XD
Very pretty story, great imagery, great tension. I think this story is one that's better if it's left open to the interpretation of the reader, in which case I found it a very enjoyable read. Keep writing! Fictionpress is running short on good authors! |