... what an evil place to leave it for over a year T.T

I hope you're planning on coming back to this, because I am dying to know what's next.

There's a difference between the words "you're" and "your". There is also a difference between "not" and "no" and between "your" and "you" and also between "you're" and "you".
You are also missing a few words.
There are many punctuation, spelling, and grammar errors.
There are also a few spacing errors.

Ah omg cliffie! why? *grovels at feet*
I'm loving this btw ;P

aww asa...I feel bad for it
(read the last part again) SQE

(narrows her eyes) Jermeny seems dense

I just realize the past few chapters didn't have any emails in it XD(I really need to pay attention to the style of text) I would be like Danny. Calling someone at 12.

you got to love salem ^.^

lol. all my friends who are boys always get placed in a dress. XD

Jermeny must not had gotten the message yet when Salem ask if he wasn't gay?

I like Aza. XD

(wonders what salem wanted to say before that guy entered)

a pencil story as a cover up?

oh...salem's past seems very intresting

Maybe something happen in salem's past

wonders who is the sender of the email