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| Windup Hopping Lederhosen 2006-08-24 ch 1,  | abuseGet bent, all of you who don't think its funny. I was twelve. Get freaking over it. And I don't review people who burn me. |
| squeaky314 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abuseHaHa! I agree that it screams "Dottie." lol. The 1st paragraph is my favorite. It was a randomly good laugh! |
| THE LAST zHERO 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abusethis note screams "dottie". Just so you know. |
| Monkeys Brains 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseI gotta agree, that wasn't too funny. If somebody didn't find out that everyone else got one too, they would be ** off. Not funny. |
| andfound815 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseHmm... not really that funny. If you were going to put it in every locker, then what about the girls? Huh? _ _ _ _ _ _ __ R/R my novel EARTHSTONES, please! |
| KG Jonta 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseI didn't really find it funny. The first and last paragraphs are nearly the same, idea wise, it would better to combined them and take away the repetitive sentences. |