|Reviews for Finality|
| no.peace.los.angeles 1/15/07 . chapter 1
This image is so strange, but somehow appropriate. Nicely worded. And the idea of this devil waiting for you is frightening. Keep writing! :)
| Halcyon Impulsion 8/23/06 . chapter 1
I like this way this sounds, the language and the breaks... but I'll admit to not understanding it :)
| Aquafied 8/21/06 . chapter 1
only in the 8th house?
could you not make it to the ninth, i mean, i need to finish that chapter.
| crazy dog events 8/17/06 . chapter 1
I have a vague appreciation for this, but I always have trouble registering any sort of real pleasur ein haiku.
| hanfiddle 8/17/06 . chapter 1
Nice one although I find the breaks a bit awkward: good atmosphere
| Basara 8/17/06 . chapter 1
after armageddon so the eternal punishment? a blibical haiku...
| trash can art 8/16/06 . chapter 1
I had to think about this one for a while, actually. It's funny how most of your haikus stay with me much longer than lengthier poems.
'angel tears sits in the eighth house' actually make me think of the nine gates of hell, especially with the 'a devil crying' part.
| Faithless Juliet 8/15/06 . chapter 1
Fascinating. I loved those last two lines.