|Reviews for Triangle|
| loving-life 8/15/06 . chapter 1
Very cute. But sad, too. I feel sorry for the girl's best friend-being always there for her and having her love someone else. Emotions are good.
I really liked this, too, because you are a flawless speller/grammatician. (Funny word!) It's so amazing to be able to read something and not have to translate parts into good, readable English.
Anyway, just one more comment-I don't know if the last paragraph really 'fits' with the rest of your story. Your story is not lighthearted, per se, but there is a kind of lightness to it, and the last paragraph almost seems to drag it down a little. If that makes any sense ...
Other than that, this was one of the best one-shots I've read on fp! Keep up the *amazing* work!
(And sorry about this uberlong review!)
| Frore 8/15/06 . chapter 1
You're definitely one of the better author's on fictionpress. Thank you for not making me stumble over spelling errors and other mechanical catastrophes!
This story in itself is short and sweet - what I particularly liked was that you focused much more on emotions than the story. A character's feelings (especially in romance) are the building blocks of a composition. Without them, you have a list of actions on a page, and no one develops any attachment. So nice work!