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J.E.Wyatt 2007-01-12 . chapter 12
Oh wow, lovely story! I was just skimming through the list of my readers, and I found this one really cool username, checked out her bio (I like reading people bio) and then, for some reason, I checked out her list of favorite stories, or was it writers? And I found you! I read this story in one read, I want to read your other stories, but I have to go to art class, so I'll read it all next time. Anyways, you should write some more!

-J.E.Wyatt
pockets are my friends 2006-12-06 . chapter 12
Ok, so she is definitely crazy. Anyway, quick question, I was wondering if she cleaned up her vomit from the crime scene, I mean, now, with all that forensic science and whatnot, they can determine who it was to have thrown up, so that's a little plot hole I guess (if that's what that means) and could easily be fixed by having her only dry heave and not actually throw up. Or you can figure something else out that will make better sense. Overall, I liked the story, it was very good and I'm actually looking forward to checking out if you have any more stories posted.
pockets are my friends 2006-12-06 . chapter 1
Interesting enough, a little too stalkerish for my taste (at the moment) but I do so love the whole idea of cloning. Lol.
Manic Star 2006-12-01 . chapter 12
Oh wow. That is a very interesting ending. This was a great story! But I have one question...what was with Lydia after all? Was she secretly a **? She hesitated when Josh asked if she was a virgin...I MUST KNOW!!
LittleTaintedOne 2006-11-26 . chapter 12
That was a wonderful and tragic story. Great job!
multiples of six 2006-11-19 . chapter 12
Haha, that was one crazy story. The plot was kind of weird (in a good way!) and there were definitely lots of surprises. The ending kind of made me laugh.. I liked it XD
The Intelligent Designer 2006-11-18 . chapter 12
Our character seems a little strange at the end, eh? If anyone's a little sick, it's her. I get the feeling she's going to do it again...
Nice tying in of the song. It wasn't cheesy. I loved the story and am happy to have read such a creative idea. Very nice job with it.
The Intelligent Designer 2006-11-18 . chapter 11
OMG, they're DEAD! Oh YES, I knew it! Anyway, cool. I liked this chapter a lot. Nice climax, and I'll be reading the conclusion in 2 seconds! Also, thanks so much for reviewing my work. I really appreciate it.
Unsociably Acceptable 2006-11-17 . chapter 2
I like ur story!
LittleTaintedOne 2006-11-12 . chapter 11
OMFG! That was so awsome and sad and twisted. I love it. I wonder what will come next in this saga of love and saddness.
dimethylmercury 2006-11-12 . chapter 11
That was a little scary..haha.. Now both are dead.. Okayy...hmm..can't wait for the last chapter(:
Manic Star 2006-11-11 . chapter 11
Oh wow...you know, you always manage to keep me away from my English homework. Ah well. I'm not complaining. :) Wow, poor Isabella...her life really sucks, doesn't it?
The Intelligent Designer 2006-11-08 . chapter 10
Yay, a new chapter! You did a great job at building the suspense at the end of the chapter. From what you had Josh Clone say, I thought he was going to kill Josh Real. If this is totally off base, either I'm a bad reader, or a line is misplaced somewhere...
Anyway, nice, I can't wait to the end. Bella changes so much throughout the story. Cool.
marikamaroca 2006-11-05 . chapter 10
cant wait fer the next one!!
Manic Star 2006-11-05 . chapter 10
Ohh...you're so EVIL, distracting me from my homework! I just want you to know that if I don't get this essay done for English, I'm going to blame you.
It's REALLY good so far, with minimal typos/other various mistakes (something I appreciate greatly).
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