oh nice. I liked this a lot. I can relate to where i used to live. It was like being a stranger, if being so alone and everything was 'bigger' than you were. I liked the lines but it's hard to explain why i relate to that so well... Anyways. I updated both accounts (mine and joint). Later

-Phoenix

i love what you're saying with this poem, you presented it so well! *adds to favorite stories list*

I don't normally like mystical prose-like stuff, but I liked this poem. You had I wonderful message and nice rhyme. Also, thanks for reading my 'Darkness' parody.