You're insane! This is nothing like total crap! I love how you have changed general ideas (such as how the moon is beautiful/boring). I like the repetition of 'so close'. Very cool. I really like 'linen hair' and 'for the stars are caught in her wispy gown' - excellent imagery. You have really interesting concepts in your poems; I especially like: 'it's harder to lay on than one might think'. This isn't your best, but it isn't your worst either. And considering that your best is professional, that means that the mediocre are amazing!! ...I hope that made sense. ^.^ Good job!