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| Tears Of Silver Rain 2006-11-05 ch 1,  | abuseWow. That was impressive. There are very dark parts which I thought were some of the best lines. I like some of the metaphorical phrases you chose to use. They flow well despite their differences from the rest of the piece. Great work! Blessed be, ~Tears of Silver Rain~ |