I want to know more.

For the shorter pieces, the situations are unclear too but I don't mind as much because they seem to be thirty second snapshots of life. But for a longer piece like this, I think more background on the situation would help ground the story. The emotions are strong but I don't know why they are, and that makes it difficult to connect with the narrator.

*claps* Like I said before, probably definitely most likely the best piece I've read from you. I. want. more. :)