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Reviews For: Oh Crap! I Lost my Shoe!

Windup Hopping Lederhosen
2006-08-21
ch 1,
abuse‘but there are balls AT a baseball game’

You have no clue how much I loves you 4 this! tee hee!

Can't wait 2 tell u bout the partay . . .
Mr.Satire
2006-08-20
ch 1,
abuseI can't wait to see where this is going!

P.S. Thanks for R&Ring my 'Darkness' poem! One of my greatest joys is making people laugh.
KevinScott
2006-08-20
ch 1,
abuseThat was EXCITING

I can't wait to see what happens!
squeaky314
2006-08-19
ch 1,
abuseAhh, so its Dottie's POV? I was gonna say, "but you're 16!" All I had to read was the title before I was like, "I SO have to read this...NOW!" Your first post that isn't a poem! Exciting! And hilarious! Where's chapter 2? I want to know about losing and finding yourself, falling in love, becoming a hero, and dancing the Macarena! Oh, and I totally feel for the main character - I know what it's like to lose your shoe...in the ocean, no less! *moment of silence for all the beloved lost shoes of the world* Ok, done. I lurve u!
Socially-Awkward
2006-08-17
ch 1,
abuseouch, that hurts...*sniff* sombody get the emotinal band-aids...lol
Cracknadddicker
2006-08-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseLife is too short to read this **.
shackled
2006-08-15
ch 1,
abusehaha, the perspective of dottie, makes me laugh :D

keep going, I want to know what happens!
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