I wasn't sure what I thought of this story when I started it but I found myself unable to stop reading. It is so compelling. Your tone drew me in, not from the mind as I was expecting, but rather from the heart. I got the end of this chapter without realizing it was the last written and it took me a good five minutes to calm down because I needed to know what happens and if there were pictures of Alexander on the film West's mother took out of his camera. It wasn't curiosity to know the ending, it was a need.

The last date listed as the update for this story is February so I'm not sure if you are continuing this story or not. I do hope that this story is continued because it's been a long time since I've been drawn to a story.

So, uh are we ever going to see Alexander again? These last few chapters really went crazy. I never would have thought that Alexander was a hallucination, and it really makes me sad, but I've got this whole side theory that Alexander was real, but I'm probably so wrong. Here's my theory anyway: Alexander was real, all of West's friends probably just didn't meet him, Kristen's a jealous freak, and West's mom was one of those crazy overbearing mother's who just didn't want to lose her kid. So, she made up his hallucinations, paid off the doctors and kept her kid at home so she could always have him even though he was all drugged up and stuff. Oh, and Sam's a hallucination who will never live up to Alexander's hallucinated/real greatness.

I don't care wat any1 says Alexander is real. I expect to see him return later in the story or else. I don't care if you have to make West relapse again to make Alex come bak. but it is just far too depressing to not have Alex. and for the record i don't think he is crazy. i think his stupid slutty ex just lied about not cuting up the pix and idk. but i really can't wait for the next chapter. PLEASE BRING ALEXANDER BAK!

I love the artistry of this lovely story and I read it whilst listening to "Brena" by A Perfect Circle and the combination of the two had me intoxicated. Your story is amazing.

WHAT! How can he not be real!! That is soo sad. I was really begining to like Alexander too. This is an amazing story by the way please continue.

Wow, this is such a beautifully written story! Really curious to find out what happens next ~
West's character and his situation is so well-developed, it really makes you feel.. ahh, I don't know how to describe it. Connected? Understanding? Something like that. You're really talented you know that?

I really like this story! :) Please update soon!

I don't knew what your talking about, but I love the first three chapters. This story is something. In other I would truly buy it from a book store. It has a personality, a je ne sais quoi. I read the first chapters while was lisining to Billie Jean Bu MJ. God... the begining of that song and that sound combined with your first chapter sent chills in my arms. is just beautiful nothing less. I don't usually review stories that I read unless I'm really impressed or I have something important to say.I checked your profile and saw that you intend to chandge the first chapters and I was... I don't knew what to say. I love the first chapter especialy the way Alexander is described its sexy, smoth and full of heat like in a summer night before a dance or a kiss. Sorry its 2:00 in the morning so I'm a bit on the whaco side. Please excuse any misspellings. Thank you for your story.

Well this story is just beyond beautiful *_*
I even cried when I found out Alexander was just a hallucination (Is he really? I don’t think people can hallucinate something like that x3)
I’m so anxious for the next chapter, please update soon :3

Ugh damn I should just stop reading stories that aren't done yet. xD I get so upset when I reach the last available chapter...

This story **ied with my head so much lol. I actually frequently IM'd my friend telling him exactly why my brain was about to abandon ship and jump out of my head. But I LOVE it. It's so addicting. I can't wait for more. Great job.

Even with the silly line breaks. xD I feel they give it...personality.

I really enjoyed reading this. It really sucks you in- you're very talented.

Just one thing though- sometimes I think you may have used 'then' instead of 'than'.

Otherwise I loved it. Thanks :)

Well, I've just read the whole story up till this chapter and I have to say I'm rather confused. I just cannot tell whether or not Alexander was real. But this is a phenomenal story! It warms my heart when I read it!

oh my god he's so crazy, but not at the same time
Weird, i suppose, but really interesting

Woah, this story is amazing! I love the whole setting, and just everything that came with it!!

Hm, just a question, though, is the story finished?
Because, if it is, than I'm a little confused: is Alex real, now, or not? And will West have a (moderately) 'happy ending'?

~Stangy

oh interesting story!