God, that's beautiful. The imagery is great. I'll be reading a lot more of your work. Thanks for the review earlier!

Very well done and nice choice of words. This line: "Buried beneath mounds of religious filth/Suffocated by the hands of God" just seemed to really stand out to me, very powerful. Great job :o) Keep it up!

''Dreams of silent suicide'' That was an awesome metaphor? But in all this was still a good poem. Keep it Up!

I like this. It's so incredibly dark and cryptic that most of its meaning are veiled beyond perdition.

J