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rebellious spirit 4/7/07 . chapter 1
i dont know much about haikus but i really like this one here!
Chaos Apple 9/4/06 . chapter 1
I like the fact that you've writen a good haiku. I'v always had trouble with those.

I can relate to this piece, and I'm glad you didn't try and make this into one of those dragged out, too long, pieces that are littering the site as of late.
Tawny Dawson 8/20/06 . chapter 1
I really like this haiku, great job!
first-casualty-of-war 8/19/06 . chapter 1
Very powerful. I really liked this (and thank you for the review!)
Moondog Dozier 8/17/06 . chapter 1
The tone in this makes it work. Good haiku.
bR0k3N 8/17/06 . chapter 1
o0o0o0o can relate lol... realy great!
tamarkaph2006 8/17/06 . chapter 1
wow, powerful statement
Basara 8/17/06 . chapter 1
well, demanding people can be really annoying...

great!
braindead1345 8/16/06 . chapter 1
You when with?*squles* thank you! i cant write about the way i feel..how do you do it?
Princess-anna57 8/16/06 . chapter 1
*applaudes*, well said. Keep writing!

Anna _
kathleen30263 8/16/06 . chapter 1
What? :) Good job!
commemorativemisery 8/16/06 . chapter 1
i like this one. it kind of reminds me of how much i hate my mom.

excellent job
The Un-great-ful 8/16/06 . chapter 1
Wow, I think you have a great talent, either that or your choice of words was serendipitous.

This says what it says in exactly the right way.

Keep writing

Alan