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rebellious spirit 4/7/07 . chapter 1i dont know much about haikus but i really like this one here! |
Chaos Apple 9/4/06 . chapter 1I like the fact that you've writen a good haiku. I'v always had trouble with those. I can relate to this piece, and I'm glad you didn't try and make this into one of those dragged out, too long, pieces that are littering the site as of late. |
Tawny Dawson 8/20/06 . chapter 1I really like this haiku, great job! |
first-casualty-of-war 8/19/06 . chapter 1Very powerful. I really liked this (and thank you for the review!) |
Moondog Dozier 8/17/06 . chapter 1The tone in this makes it work. Good haiku. |
bR0k3N 8/17/06 . chapter 1o0o0o0o can relate lol... realy great! |
tamarkaph2006 8/17/06 . chapter 1wow, powerful statement |
Basara 8/17/06 . chapter 1well, demanding people can be really annoying... great! |
braindead1345 8/16/06 . chapter 1You when with?*squles* thank you! i cant write about the way i feel..how do you do it? |
Princess-anna57 8/16/06 . chapter 1*applaudes*, well said. Keep writing! Anna _ |
kathleen30263 8/16/06 . chapter 1What? :) Good job! |
commemorativemisery 8/16/06 . chapter 1i like this one. it kind of reminds me of how much i hate my mom. excellent job |
The Un-great-ful 8/16/06 . chapter 1Wow, I think you have a great talent, either that or your choice of words was serendipitous. This says what it says in exactly the right way. Keep writing Alan |