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Reviews For: Lilac Petal
ElevenElevenPM 2006-08-23 . chapter 1
This is really quite beautiful.
Ygg 2006-08-17 . chapter 1
Nicely soft and fragile.. personally I wouldn't use a word ("soft") twice in the same Haiku.. but that's only me ;-) Good work!
Nobody-n-Particular 2006-08-17 . chapter 1
Nice appeal to the senses.
sylvia's syndrome 2006-08-16 . chapter 1
Nice description. Simple but enjoyable. Keep writing.
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