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Rain
C. F. Handle
2006-08-21 . chapter 1
What a nice piece. Very tranquil. I love the picture you form with these three lines.
Ygg
2006-08-17 . chapter 1
Very original imagery.. especially with the use of "maiden's tears". Great work!
Nobody-n-Particular
2006-08-17 . chapter 1
Very nice - evokes pleasant emotions.
hanfiddle
2006-08-17 . chapter 1
Very beautiful and dreamy. Comment (not for this one, but for others: the title is not normally part of the haiku, or, better said, haiku do not normally have titles...)
Basara
2006-08-17 . chapter 1
for that land only but not on her inner soul...
nice...
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