Reviews for Couple at the Beach

Nobody-n-Particular 2006-08-17 ch 1,	abuseIntriguing, such a sense of futility and caution - loved the languid, peaceful pace underlying the tension.
Take The Stairs 2006-08-16 ch 1,	abuseWow. The flow and images of this poem are amazing. I really, really like this.
innominate noun 2006-08-16 ch 1,	abuseThat is good, it is sad, and it made me cry.Unfortunately, I have nothing constructive to say except for an urge to grab cheerleader pompoms and make up a strange couplet telling you to keep on writing!I loved the formatting of this and I loved...well...it...So, grin!-Weirdly