i loved this, good job. i have a few things that seem a little off to me but otherwise it's so great. keep up the good work. (we could start our own book, wouldn't that be sweet... sweetness )lol.. ttyl

-Phoenix

this is good!, i really like the last coupl lines, i like how your writng is realistic : )

*applaudes* great work, well done. Keep writing!

Anna _

i really like this poem how you describe that you have your own safe place in your mind sort of. )