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Femme de Dieu
2006-09-11
ch 1,
abuseArgh! Such desolation...hate it when life does this...as it is so OFTEN fond of doing...especially to we who love too much...

Truly, Tourterelle
Warg
2006-08-16
ch 1,
abuseHey..

Love the tone u drew, from the start.. smart choice brining in "and" there..

The flow was smooth and the little emphasis on the "again" is a brilliant touch.. and the cycle continues.. great work.. :)

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