Very risky subject, especially during this time of year. I just watched a documentary on the World Trade Center last night-chilling, really.

You don't offend with this poem, because you don't try to be inappropriate or exploitive. I like the refraining "fire smoke heat pain terror" line, and the fact that there are no commas in it-the reader understands the sense of panic you're trying to make the reader understand.

You use a wonderful control in writing about this tragedy. Nice job.

J

Sad, sad, sad. Good work.

I wasn't offended at all. I thought it was a well thought out and emotional piece. Keep up the good work!

Laurel B.