|Reviews for and the spirits chant|
| With Rhyme and Reason 8/17/06 . chapter 1
Very risky subject, especially during this time of year. I just watched a documentary on the World Trade Center last night-chilling, really.
You don't offend with this poem, because you don't try to be inappropriate or exploitive. I like the refraining "fire smoke heat pain terror" line, and the fact that there are no commas in it-the reader understands the sense of panic you're trying to make the reader understand.
You use a wonderful control in writing about this tragedy. Nice job.
| Halcyon Impulsion 8/17/06 . chapter 1
Sad, sad, sad. Good work.
| Elle Blaisure 8/16/06 . chapter 1
I wasn't offended at all. I thought it was a well thought out and emotional piece. Keep up the good work!