;_; Aww, I'm so sorry Evie

This is a very emotional piece, very dark. It's so sad and honest. I like the rhyming and how the words fit together.

You are a beautiful writer. This was very good, very dark.

Wow, a very powerful piece. I can somewhat relate as my "real" father was also an asshole. Good work!

:( So sad and tragic. Well written. Keep writing!

~Anna~