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| Phoenix 2006-08-18 ch 1, anon. | abuse;_; Aww, I'm so sorry Evie |
| rust phoenix 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very emotional piece, very dark. It's so sad and honest. I like the rhyming and how the words fit together. |
| Freaked 2006-08-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou are a beautiful writer. This was very good, very dark. |
| Elle Blaisure 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, a very powerful piece. I can somewhat relate as my "real" father was also an **. Good work! |
| Princess-anna57 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abuse:( So sad and tragic. Well written. Keep writing! ~Anna~ |