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| Femme de Dieu 2006-09-11 ch 1,  | abuseAh, good this! Yes, best to be determined to move on. I am at peace also after reading this. I agree wholeheartedly with what the first reviewer said. I too was hurried along...the style you chose was impeccable...to have one line flow into the next with what seemed to be no particular reason...no periods...just free-flowing, "I'm gonna do this!" tumbling out. I loved it! "finally, finally okay inside my own skin." Let us know how that goes. It's a difficult thing to accomplish, but once done, it's a wonderful feeling! Keep on walking...and writing... Truly, Tourterelle |
| The Ponderer 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abusewow... this poeem is intense... i found myself accelerating as i read, gripped by every word... the image i have is of that battle in lord of the rings; the two towers; (fighting against overwhelming odds), but i like that there's a sense of peace at the end. this is spectacularly written. please pLeAsE PLEASE keep on writing. |