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| Staphen 2006-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseHonestly, I really don't know what to say. Either work on your clarity or (if you were going for cryptic) leave it as it is. |
| Symphonious 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abuseThis was a very expressive poem in alot of ways. You were probably unsure of it because it was one of those spur poems that come instantly out of nowhere. I usually get my best inspirational poems like that. |