Cyute. :)

That was interesting. I realized I haven't read and reviewed everything by you, so I've made it my goal to R&R everything peopl e I know have written so then I can say HEY REVIEW. D:

Weird..

I like it, even if I did think it would turn out shitty.

Stop having vast amounts of talent, you.

That last line kills me dead with the amsuing. I think I like this better than the poems even :)

You really aren’t that bright, are you? Do you not realize that attention is the fuel for all flamers? You dedicate bio pages to us, posts to us, entire threads—even a ‘Hall of Flamers’, and that only makes us laugh harder and want to do it more. You protest and protest that it doesn’t bother you, that it only makes you stronger, that you’ll never quit writing, but yet your time is devoted to your tirades about us instead of your stories. It’s evident, after all, that none of your time is actually dedicated to your ‘works’ as prosaic and poorly written as they are.

You’re an easy target, hon. Your lies are so far-fetched that it’s beyond laughable. Your need for attention and flat-lined self-esteem are hilariously pathetic. You state that you create accounts for the purpose of flaming, that you flame people if they deserve it. I guess you didn’t realize the sting when your actions come back to bite you on the ass.

Don’t you get it? You’re entertainment to us. Pure, hilarious, pitiable entertainment for when we’re bored. And we’re not moving along anytime soon. So until we get bored with you, buckle up, sit back, and enjoy the ride.

-LMAoaY

It was a sweet poem. I really enjoyed it. (:

It seemed to jump from place to place, but what can you do with difficult words like that? It was still very good. =)

It's really good. My impression of the title was ten random words with a couple others thrown in, but it's good.

Your friends seem to like the moon, nocturnal are they, but the peacock lines make this a great poem, but it currently holding third, as the other two are highly impressive, and will be a chore to top

Logic falls from the skyLike water from an angels eye...

A couplet that will stick with me for quite some time, they are that good

I am awestruck. I don't know what else to say, especially knowing that you didn't pick the 10 words. It is most impressive.

I feel repetitive, but again, good poem.

"The romantic torch

Of sweet young love"

That made me aww.

Another great poem.This line made me happy:"A brilliant display of colorful wings"