Fantastic! This is great, you really pin pointed what beauty magazines are all about. Your rhymth got better as you went along - you seemed to fall into your stride. The ending is so good because makes the whole thing tell a story that felt really personal. Well done, you did a great job.

Oh, this was lovely! Brutal honesty, served to the ones who need it most. May I ask if you actually did send this to Vogue? If not, you really ought to. Its lines may pass under the blindest eyes, yet it would certainly be worth your attempts.

This was very masterfully created, and tastefully presented. I could almost hear your disembodied voice, spitting out the words scathingly to a dumbstruck audience. Good job, once again!

How true, how true...