This is terribly sad and beautiful "Never to bloom; never to fade." This one line was my favorite and it broke my heart too. Nice Job! ~~Scottie

i like this a lot. especially the last four lines.

-michael hoblak

This is so sweet and sad... Great job.

*::~Cat~::*

interestingly put. Ruby

I love how the poem has dialogue, it adds more reality to it, which I like. And the repetition has more rhythm and theme to it too. The emotions are simple but prominent, and easy for the reader to really grasp. The last few lines are beautiful too.

I like the way the dialogue bounces back and forth between the he and she. It gives the poem a playful feel, and that playful feelings is betrayed by the not-so-happy ending. The irony is bittersweet. Keep writing!