THIS KICKS (pardon me) ASS, i love this poem, very well written, its in the style i'm trying to use but never can great job, i don't care what you say you are a good poet

"The earth cried tears & I cried rain" Perfect.

I love the mood that you've created in this poem, although I thought that the ending was a bit abrupt. I admire the relation you create between rain and tears. The descriptions and imagery are wonderful as well. I look forward to reading more of your writings!