"He stripped his own." Beautiful imagery about the power of someones love.

I really liked how this poem depicted the sacrfices people make for eachother in a strong love relationship. Very bittersweet.

If you're concerned about the rating, this poem would be K ...

I usually have one criticism at least, but I don't even think you have a grammar mistake, so I'm just going to say, very well written, and leave it at that. This is going on my favorites.

~Luna Turner

As promised your bonus review!

I like this.. the whole heaven/hell thing was well done... and I love the ending it's so sweet.. a true testament to love...

A few things... why the accent on banished? that seemed weird
Also I like the capitalization of watcher, protector, angel and lobe because those are all his roles, but capitalizing fires and cloud seemed odd...

It's a really great and unique description of love... a pleasant surprise from what the title made me think... great job

Aww...I like this. I'm prejudiced, because I have a love for rhyming, and anything that doesn't comply with that OCD irks me XD, but I thought it was really romantic.

-Ramen

its soo good... it dosent matter how long a poem is its the word that matter. ^_^

very interesting. I love how it is simple in imagery and meaning. I would say it would be great if you took this idea and expanded it to be a much longer poem.

Wow..that's really powerful.You should write more poems.