aww such a shame you stopped! such a good cliff hanger!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS

THIS STORY IS INTENSE ND I ENVY U CAUSE U GOT TALENT IN UR WRITING SO YEA I ENVY U ALOT 2 ! :)

uPADTE SON XD

Um... I haven't read this chapter, not sure If i've read the story, just wondering who has taken up writing this? Feburary 2008, I got shocking news... didn't think Jinny was writing anymore... since I was told he was dead.

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its strange that i have almost commented all of ur writng, but i love it.8-) i llove this one two, ist sensual and funii:-)

you know who ravi reminds me of? casanova. except the gay kind. well, casanova was supposedly bi, but eh. Ravi rocks! Can't wait to see what happens next! keep up the great work.

*lol* i really do like this story so far *lol* It cracks me up even though I thought that he was going to get the crap beat out of him when that girl's brother came after him 0.0 scary. Anywhoo, there's another chapter so off on my way I go!!

Kewel!

This looks uber familiar to me.

Kya~~ Moree More!! I like Phil! More!

Another great chapter! Great work! ^^

i thiunk phil is really really hot! i luv his characterm and oh pink haired boy is getting it too lol

how culd u leave that kinda cliffie?? he was so gonna get laid!

ok, we need to talk... why do you make such hot stories? AND such sexy charas? lol i would love it if Ravi and Cyril met XD anyway, goign back to the talk, i can't wait for next chap

Wow! I really enjoyed this!! I gave it a "Hmm... I wonder" at first, but having read it through... BRAVO! I applaud you! Keep up the great work! ^^