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| Nocturnal-Fire 2008-08-25 ch 7,  | abuseSo, i don't mean to nag, but is there even a slightest chance that you will finish this story? I don't care how long it takes i just wants some glimmer of hope that i will one day read how this one ends. I love so many characters in this one and the plot so far is so original that i can't bring myself to give up on it just yet. Anyways, good lucks in everything! |
| blackrose214 2008-03-20 ch 8, | abuseGreat story so far. I absolutely adore Davie. That guy`s relly funny. And the plot is interesting/thrilin and original as well. Keep up the great work and update soon, please! :D |
| terriestal-angell 2007-01-28 ch 8, | abuseThis is really really really confusing. Hopefully you can clear things up about what exactly is going on? A little timeline or something, coz I really do not know when something is happening and where it is. And stuff like that. Please and thank you. If not for that, I think I would be immensely enjoying your story. |
| afk 2006-11-22 ch 8, | abuseFun chapter! i luv barrock! i want him1! will be waiting for next chap! XD |
| Nocturnal-Fire 2006-10-21 ch 8, | abuseNice! So, next chapter Davie will meet Rio? Did I guess right? Anywho, loved the chapter and am all excited to find out more about the whole Seer deal. |
| bambi4real 2006-10-12 ch 8, anon. | abuseI like hearing the story from the other points of views but I think it would be more understandable if you indicated at the beginning of the ch who the speaker was, because I know I get bogged down with trying to figure out who is speaking and can barely pay attention to the rest of the story. Then when I figure out the speaker I have to go back and reread it just for it to make sense now that I have some sort of context to place the events. |
| Esquirella 2006-10-11 ch 7, | abuseMan am I confused! But I liked it! |
| Esquirella 2006-10-11 ch 6, | abuseRace leader? COOL! My lips are sealed! |
| afk 2006-10-08 ch 7, | abusei agree rio is funny and he has a very bad attention spam hahaha but i liked liked this chapter XD |
| afk 2006-09-26 ch 6, | abusecute chapter! i like rio he sounds so adorable! XD update updayte! |
| Nocturnal-Fire 2006-09-25 ch 6, | abuseReading this chapter was the best thing that happened to me all day. I was grinning like an idiot the whole time reading, I think the term “giddy” could have been applied to me during that time as well. Anywho, Yey to new kickass characters, especially Ari, love the bastard! (I mean bastard in a good way =) ) As per usual – sweet chapter, would pay for more. |
| Cute Little Mongoose 2006-09-10 ch 5, | abusehorrible horrible ending! i do love davie as a puppy tho! i love puppys! |
| Cute Little Mongoose 2006-09-10 ch 4, | abusei'm so confussed! i don't under stand this chapter at all. i'm so lost. |
| Cute Little Mongoose 2006-09-10 ch 3, | abuseomg i love Rini! she was my favorite salar moon charecter! |
| afk 2006-09-09 ch 5, | abuseAh ok! now i get it! nice nice! *_* and oh fun chapter i want to be a furry dog with a waggly tail :3 lol |