So, i don't mean to nag, but is there even a slightest chance that you will finish this story? I don't care how long it takes i just wants some glimmer of hope that i will one day read how this one ends. I love so many characters in this one and the plot so far is so original that i can't bring myself to give up on it just yet. Anyways, good lucks in everything!

Great story so far. I absolutely adore Davie. That guy`s relly funny. And the plot is interesting/thrilin and original as well. Keep up the great work and update soon, please! :D

This is really really really confusing. Hopefully you can clear things up about what exactly is going on? A little timeline or something, coz I really do not know when something is happening and where it is. And stuff like that. Please and thank you. If not for that, I think I would be immensely enjoying your story.

Fun chapter! i luv barrock! i want him1! will be waiting for next chap! XD

Nice! So, next chapter Davie will meet Rio? Did I guess right? Anywho, loved the chapter and am all excited to find out more about the whole Seer deal.

I like hearing the story from the other points of views but I think it would be more understandable if you indicated at the beginning of the ch who the speaker was, because I know I get bogged down with trying to figure out who is speaking and can barely pay attention to the rest of the story. Then when I figure out the speaker I have to go back and reread it just for it to make sense now that I have some sort of context to place the events.

Man am I confused! But I liked it!

Race leader? COOL! My lips are sealed!

i agree rio is funny and he has a very bad attention spam hahaha but i liked liked this chapter XD

cute chapter! i like rio he sounds so adorable! XD update updayte!

Reading this chapter was the best thing that happened to me all day. I was grinning like an idiot the whole time reading, I think the term “giddy” could have been applied to me during that time as well. Anywho, Yey to new kickass characters, especially Ari, love the bastard! (I mean bastard in a good way =) ) As per usual – sweet chapter, would pay for more.

horrible horrible ending! i do love davie as a puppy tho! i love puppys!

i'm so confussed! i don't under stand this chapter at all. i'm so lost.

omg i love Rini! she was my favorite salar moon charecter!

Ah ok! now i get it! nice nice! *_* and oh fun chapter i want to be a furry dog with a waggly tail :3 lol