ASDFJGHJG -- that was GORGEOUS.

Your choice of words = beautiful, and it's awesome how you include the images of the beach, and the water; it paints a really pretty picture. The words in brackets add a lot to it as well. It's breathtaking.

"You’d been hiding from unintending jaws/and I’d been lured in by a broken song." -- that's probably my favorite line. :)

beautiful

Absolutely brilliant. However, I think, in the last line, omitting "(I love your rediscovery...)" would prove more impactful. Only my two cents, though. This is ** brilliant.

marie

Quite beautiful.