That was FREAKIN AWESOME!! I was laughin so much! This story was so perfect! You can't expect it to go right the first time, it was so cute how awkward and bumpy they were. I loved it!

THIS ONE SHOT JUST MADE MY DAY. very funny and hawt xD

HAHA! I definatly wanna kno their story!

majorly sexy! and i think you should leave it as-is, not epilouge. i like it kind of mysterious. good. even in it ** horny pervy way.

Definitely sexy, and funny. Where's the followup? You left us hanging.

this is hilarious and freggin hot. :)

LOl I liked it...lol

Haha, oh man, that has got to be one embarrassing first time for a couple. Totally hilarious though, and it's obvious they'll have stuff to talk about for years to come (if they stay together that is). Great job!
~Mia

Aw man, I seriously NEED to know the story between these two. They are seriously just too cute.

Your stories never fail to entertain, very nicely done.

You are such a riot, seriously. I have been cracking up over the line "Hand meet dick. Dick meet hand." for the last 20 minutes. Which again, btw, not a good thing being so close to my parents room. And now, after reading only two of your stories, I am on a total giggle fit.

Rabbit
(sorry for not signing the other one, I forgot)

heh, wow, really made me laugh, so sweet, just loved it!

well, write away... unless if the epilogue is already posted and i just missed it. i hope not.

oh, this is good. first time, huh? it was sexy.

this was really good!! :D very sexy! i also read all of the saturday morning cartoons story waiting for the rest i love it i was going to review but so many other pple did it seemed kind of pointless. i really love the way you wright its amazingly realistic, funny and witty!! :]

Write. Please.

ahahahaha, funny as hell. Write an epilouge...that was just so funny, lol!