This is pretty. It reminds me of Death Note. I'm not saying that you took it from Death note, just that it reminds me of Light and L's relationship if they were gay, and that's not entirely a bad thing.

Really love the last lines..

I'm... well...I'm in awe! This nearly knocked me speechless, which is an unbelievable accomplishment as I'm quite chatty."You're not the enemy.You're just a milestone."-words shake with power-Beautiful! Write more!