wow.

this is wonderful!

i looved the rythm of it

&& its so true 3

Secrets... I like secrets. And I like this poem. Magnifique.

i love the rhyming and unique rythm, keep up the good work!

the oh so famed one that got 3 reviews in one night (wish my stories did that they hardly get three.) suckers. anyway i liked the rhythm. there was a truth to it that i liked a lot. actually i see why people read it, it is "pretty dang good" like that one reviewer said. lol.

-Phoenix

This is really cool. I like the subject, first of all, and the rhyme scheme really works well. I love the way you set it up. Pretty dang good.

Good rhythm. I like it.

-faints- This is great! I like the rhythm you utilized so wonderfully. Write on!

Ailonwy