this is really good, i like it. is the tune sad or rock? i find it sad with a sense of happy

wonderful poem, great analogy, but i think you could improve the line "so sometimes crying in the rain feels better" although i really like the idea of that line, i think you could say it with more rythm, great work anyway!

very nice. just three more after this. will you review some more of my story. putting who you are though doesn't help though, it really is quite neutral. (get my point?) to me, unlike the person that you were talking about over the phone, i think i understand what you mean by this poem. i like it. review (hint, hint, nudge, nudge)

-Phoenix

Interesting ideas of multicolored teardrops... it took me a minute to get used to the numbering format, but it was pretty good.