i thought that it captured the way bella described her emptiness perfectly and the part about bella lighting edwards sky was perect. all i can say is wow...

Coolio. I heart Stephenie Meyer's books. I'm not sure what I think about New Moon yet. I'll have to re-read it. Edward and Bella are definately my favorite literary pairing though. I really enjoyed reading this poem. You're pretty good.

Good poem. Stays very close to New Moon. i LOVE Stephenie Meyer's books. I literally shrieked when I saw New Moon out in August. It was supposedly coming out in October and they changed it. I was SO happy. I hope they do that with Eclipse, too. I want to know what happens. I am in love with Edward. If only he was real...

Oh! Nice! I loved Twilight and New Moon. Stephenie Meyers a good author. I can see how the books inspired this poem. Nice job!

Wow. That's really good.And it seems we have the same taste in books. Cause I need New Moon. :)

Yay, another person who shares my love for Stephenie Meyers' Twilight & New Moon!

I, too, was thinking about maybe doing a poem about Edwards' and Bellas' feelings. I like yours though.

The poem was good. I feel that eveything was described well.

The story that Stephine is working on in between stories, Midnight Sun, is in Edwards perspective of the first book. What she has done is up on online. So if you want the URL just message me and I'll send it to you.

hey thats pretty good...i kinda feel sorry for you man, but hey if you keep writing stuff this deep, u might one day get someone better, GOOD JOB...

u should review my story immortal awakening