Hmm I think if you went to the years after and just did random flashbacks it should be fine XD

It might work better for whatever you plan to go for!

AND ZOMG Jacob! Can't wait to read more XD

Is this story going to skip 4 years to when they meet again?If so you show his marine days in flashbacks.Great Work.Keep it up.

Oh thats so interesting! I can't believe she went for the kiss too XD Hope you can update again soon!

Very interesting . keep writing...

You've got me intrigued! Can't wait for you to update. I particularly like your style of writing, flows well. Are you only going to have Lien and Kay's POVs?

Have a good day,Teabean

i think it's going to be a wonderful story, darling! it pleases the hopeless romantic in me, which honestly is most of me...anyways, update as soon as you can!

~McKenna