Quite thought-provoking.

I love how you used the onamontapeic theme "tick-tick-tick" to level, and almost meter, your poem. It drones well, and gives a dimension to the rendition of time that is seldom seen in poetry. Good stuff, keep writing.

Not what I expected, but a pleasant surprise. :) I think spacing it out would help a lot. Two of my favourite things in this is the recurring theme of 'tick tick tick' and the line 'It knows the truths which develop bias of history’s writers' that line makes my blood boil. Even the people portrayed as heros in those books aren't what they seem and it gets me so mad when the people writing it lets so many others believe who is seen as 'evil' or 'godly' when there's so much more to a person. Anyways, that was a long enough rant!

Keep writing~