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| Jules 2008-05-03 ch 7, anon. | abuseReproba Spero -False I hope- Clever. If only your characters were forced to take Latin like me. Anyways, thanks for an interesting chapter. I'll definately keep reading. |
| RealityIsRealitive 2008-02-16 ch 14,  | abuseThis is a great story. It has an interesting, unique plot and is amazingly well written; all traits that are rare in today's literature. I'm really glad that it was nominated for the SKOWs, because I never would have come across it otherwise. So keep up the good work and and I promise to vote for you! |
| Rizzy 2007-12-18 ch 14, | abusewow Im so pleased with how this story turned out! Very interesting and the characters are engaging. |
| carmelatte 2007-09-30 ch 14, | abuseIntriguing! Love how there's so many questions you haven't answered, it's a nice way to end the story, and well I'm stumped.. :) Whilst I love how it ended, I would have liked to know more about the mystery villain, and maybe a bit more about Daria and Clara. You have some great description and imagery in this story, and to be honest, a pleasure to read :D |
| Snowy Murder 2007-08-22 ch 14, | abuseThis is truly a amazing story. You have much talent and I urge you to write more. I'm sure, if you ever wanted a career as an author, you would definitely succeed. Once again, this is a fabulous story. |
| Disenchanted Words 2007-05-22 ch 14, | abuseThis is an amazing story! I love it. I'm glad I read it. |
| Disenchanted Words 2007-05-22 ch 6, | abuseThat's a lot of spiders. Kind of creepy in a way. |
| Disenchanted Words 2007-05-22 ch 5, | abuseThis chapter was surprising. Nice job. |
| Disenchanted Words 2007-05-22 ch 4, | abuseVery interesting. I will continue on with this story. |
| Disenchanted Words 2007-05-22 ch 3, | abuseNow that's just mean. I don't care what someone's been through, I'd still go to my kid...that made me angry. But anyway, it's good so far. |
| Laughing In the Night 2007-05-16 ch 14, | abuseIt's beautiful, a tragic tale. If you see it from my droll point of view, it's a spiralling story. |
| Disenchanted Words 2007-05-16 ch 2, | abuseOh, this is good. This story is different. I'm glad it's like nothing I've read before. I like your style of writing. You forgot a space between 'elegant' and 'oval'. And at the very end you put 'stop'. Do you mean 'spot'? Great chapter. Disenchanted Words |
| Disenchanted Words 2007-05-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, this story does seem interesting. I was hooked by this chapter. I would be glad to add this to my C2. It's a good start. I'm glad you are consistant with your writing. If I didn't have work I would read the rest of this. Well, when I return I'll read some more. ~Disenchanted Words~ |
| pocket sized 2007-03-04 ch 14, | abuseI thought your story was really wonderful! It didn't have any crappy bad guy falls in love with main girl and blah blah blah. It was an actual suspense/supernatural/horror story and I loved it. Great job. |
| zyryon 2007-01-14 ch 14, anon. | abusecertainly a unique story. you write well... i liked the part when clara was offering a dollar for daria's house. there's a kind of irony in that that amuses me. bet the devil must've been **. well, i think i'm gonna check out your other stories. ^-^ |