this is nicely done... im' not sure exactly what to say, but its good. real nicely written and i like the ending. powerful ending.

Aw gee that was sad. But it was a nice sad... um, actually kind of mixed emotions while reading it. Like hope in badness or something...

"faithless, though hope is frail...the passion for freedom shall prevail."

:) ^ Me likey those lines much. Though I must say I enjoyed the whole thing. Thank you!

~Me~