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Reviews For: A Problem of Possession

Nina Windia
2008-07-22
ch 1,
abuseThis story is so brizzare that it's brilliant. Seriously, it is.
ham337dd
2007-04-29
ch 1,
abuseI think you should continue this. You got me so excited, and then the story ends. Yeah, I love it—it has sweet parts and funny parts, and I think Jen, Hunter, Melia, and Grahm are great characters.
C. J. Currie
2006-12-13
ch 1,
abuseFun, witty, engaging...altogether, a very pleasant read. Thank you!
Peregrin Chopkins
2006-10-27
ch 1,
abuseI must say, this is very original. I'm impressed. Nicely done. I like the matter-of-fact style it's written in.

Keep up the good work.
elisefey
2006-10-23
ch 1,
abuseHoly crap, I loved this! So original and creative and freakin' hilarious! I mean, it was truly bizarre and warped and yet somehow poignantly humorous. I think part of what makes it work is that you simply tell it as if it is an entirely normal occurance and you give just the right details to enhance that feeling, despite the fact that it is clearly not normal. There were a few editing mishaps, but that's not unusual when you don't have a professional editor to go over your work for you so I'm not about to hold that against you. In fact, I'm adding it to my C2 for stories that verge on experimental but successful, because truly you are falling into that category with the way you carry this off.
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