Reviews for Hindsight Was Never On My Side

Reviews For: Hindsight Was Never On My Side

LunarGuardianPhoenix 2008-03-28 ch 1,	abuseI just LOVE the way you write it makes me think everytime. I must say that this really (for some odd reason) makes me think. You're amazing. ~LunarGuardianPhoenix
AOK 2007-05-17 ch 1,	abuseHow interesting. To be honest, the sort of relationship in this poem reminds me of one I read in a book once, a bit...but not quite enough for it not to be original. You use your formatting very well, I can say that much. Wonderful poem. :)
WickedSilence 2006-12-08 ch 1,	abuseNeedless to say, it's creative. I liked how the visual effects added (mostly) to the meaning of specific words--ex."puzzlepiecedtogether". However, some of the underlining and slashes and bolding and other eccentricities seemed to detract attention from the actual message of the poem. For instance, in "everytIme you e x h a l e d" I like the spaces between letters in exhaled since it reminds me of breaths between phrases, however the bolded i doesn't do anything for me. Little inconsequential additions are distracting, is what I mean. But overall I enjoyed how your details built up images of this relationship. It's good.
Annaece's Forsaken Corpse 2006-08-20 ch 1,	abusereally wonderful piece here...but be careful not to over so the format
NO LONGER USING 2006-08-19 ch 1,	abusePerfect is suffice it to say: seriously some writer and she can't think of any words to say (write) `lACY`
by His blood 2006-08-19 ch 1,	abusethis is absolutely beautiful. the format ... it took my breath away. it's amazing. this is incredible, just perfect ... and even the author's notes are poetic. this is just ... exquisite, is all i can think to describe it.
fairEtales 2006-08-18 ch 1,	abuseAw. Just...sad. Loved the similes and metaphors. Created wonderful imagery, as always. Great work!
randompoetry 2006-08-18 ch 1,	abuseWonderful. The effects you used made it even more powerful.

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