This is my favorite of yours (so far)
I love "but with your lips sailing into mine" that is so beautifully written! I've never heard that before.

and "with my heart doing leaps and bounds and with my voice underwater" just sounds so... soothing.

I love it.

i like it. it was simple. cute, and witty. not too much, but saying what it needs to say.

you have this way of tapping into the universal. who has not felt this, at some point in their lives? it's so poignant and beautiful. i do adore your poetry for its honesty & simplicity...

Incredible. I wish I could feel like this in reality; your poem lets me feel a piece of it.

beautiful ... just a gorgeous, enthralling poem. the format, the word choice -- flawless. i love this.

I like it, sweet and descriptive. Last two lines were a great closer.

Encapsulates the situation well. Broad enough to be universally relatable, yet specific enough to be individual. Well done. Good sound.

The last stanza is amazing. The entire poem is flawless and beautiful. Excellent.

The feeling you put in is literally pouring out from the computer screen, its amazing.

this comes off as a painting in my mind, especially with the title i just imagine waves and people and blankets and i don't even know what this painting would look like i just see elements.

wow this is really good, it can apply to a number of things, love, friendship ect it's very simple but it's got a powerful message, i just love it great work keep it up and thank you for sharing