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| Mylinda Antoinette 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseWhy don't you ever show me your stories, Jaina... and this one, your best one yet, too? |
| Gabrielle Addison 2006-09-25 ch 1, | abuseOHH! I love this story! CONTINUE! |
| Charmarie 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuseCool story. I love it. Anyways, Thanks for the review on mine. I absolutely don't regret giving your story a chnace cuz this story was the bomb! You should've gotten more reviews. Thanks again. I look forward to your next chapters. |
| SassyLil'Thunderstorm 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuseWelcome to fictionpress! I like this, it got to the drama of the story quickly. I hope you continue soon, I want to see what happens next. Quick critique: On the paragraph that begins with "The man was towed," you have a few errors in spacing. Good job! |