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Reviews For: You Are Always There

Mylinda Antoinette
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abuseWhy don't you ever show me your stories, Jaina... and this one, your best one yet, too?
Gabrielle Addison
2006-09-25
ch 1,
abuseOHH! I love this story! CONTINUE!
Charmarie
2006-08-18
ch 1,
abuseCool story. I love it. Anyways, Thanks for the review on mine. I absolutely don't regret giving your story a chnace cuz this story was the bomb! You should've gotten more reviews. Thanks again. I look forward to your next chapters.
SassyLil'Thunderstorm
2006-08-18
ch 1,
abuseWelcome to fictionpress!

I like this, it got to the drama of the story quickly. I hope you continue soon, I want to see what happens next.

Quick critique: On the paragraph that begins with "The man was towed," you have a few errors in spacing.

Good job!
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