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Reviews For: Everything Turns To Dust

Guardrail
2006-08-21
ch 1,
abuseThe truth is always a good tool to use in a good poem, such as this one. Great job, your point is definately clear. The last lines are especially vivid, "the grass is always greener, but your razor is always sharp." Definately keep writing.
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