|Reviews for Reunion|
| Panicking With Hesitation 8/28/06 . chapter 1
wow! i love how you write.
| With Rhyme and Reason 8/18/06 . chapter 1
Well, I'll be honest with you. I don't really like this poem. You seem to scratch the surface of something, but you really don't go into it deeply enough. The first stanza is the better one, and I like the "I want to run / And run and run and run / And run and never stop until" lines-the cadence really makes the lines seem like they're running.
Your idea is suggestive, but it needs a little more work. Nice subtle rhyming though, with "spot" and "stop"-when you have so few rhymes in one piece, it's good to use them well. The "spot"/"stop" rhyme suggests "stop at that spot" in time-one of the poem's main themes.
Not my cup of tea, but I've definitely read worse. Write on.